Sunday, December 19, 2010

Angst

A piece inspired by a short story from the book 'One Amazing Thing'

Whenever I turn back and look,
You appear a bit of a stranger
A bit of a stranger I too.

We no longer stand where we stood once,
Neither is there a chance we will be together,
Nor is there any angst or remorse,
Yet you appear unhappy.

You were a spent moment in a spent relationship,
Tonight as the moon plays his melancholic tune,
A mere memory remains of the last time we walked,
Yet you seem to have lost your way.

V.V.Vikram

4 comments:

maddy said...

Loved, Loved, Loved this one :)

OliveOyl said...

You must write more often vikki ...you have followers at this part of the world :) ..!!

I like reading your blog and this one here is a beautiful post ..!!

vikram said...

thanks sowji :)

mohan said...

Vikram,

Read REMORSE,the language is horrifying, from the gutters if I may say.Conservative old Dad u may say,but to me it only conveys poverty in use of appropriate words/ language.Dont crucify the art u will end up being on the Cross.
Dad.